@jannesalovaara In your reflections on teleology and sustainability, you’re using “crayons to colour outside the lines” of the scope of the reading list of the course. This is good for me as an instruction, because you’re using an inquiring system that sweeps in new content, and somewhat edgy for you as a student (particularly if you’re going to include it into the final research report) because you can’t assume that all of the readers (i.e. graders) will have read all of that material, so you’ll have to expand on your explanations in the writing.
So you led me over to take a look at Andrew Woodfield’s book on Telelogy, as well as a brief peek at a 1984 discussion of the book. You’re definitely in the philosophy of ends. While I had opened up the discussion with the <a href="http://dx.doi.org/10.1002/(SICI)1099-1735(199603)13:13.0.CO;2-O“>Ackoff and Gharajedaghi 1996 article on Systems and their Models as teleology, we really didn’t have time in class to discuss whether animals and plants can have purposes of their own. In talks where I saw Russ Ackoff speak, he spoke about animated systems, as systems that can move. Thus a tree isn’t animate, but a bird is. From a systems perspective, this means that a bird can change its environment by leaving a hostile or inhospitable place. A tree can’t change its environment, although it can adapt to change itself. This is more fully fleshed out in Ackoff’s On Purposeful Systems, which I only suggest to the most hardcore readers.
You also led me to look up Max Neef on the Word Future Council site, as well as noticing that his thinking seems to be compatible with the Natural Step’s view on planetary sustainbility, placing him in good company. You also led me to look up Matthieu Richard on TED, describing his leaving science (biochemistry) behind in favour of Buddhism.
If I may make a suggestion as you think about your final research report … The title of the course is “Systemic Thinking of Sustainable Communities”, which means (i) sustainability, (ii) communities, and (iii) systems thinking. You’re covering the philosophical foundations of (i) sustanability, but it’s unclear how you’re going to link that with (ii) communities — the thrust of the course was on considering dialogues and conversations to do that — and it would help to bring the (iii) systems thinking more explicitly into the writing. You could do (ii) and (iii) by referencing more articles from the reading list, or similar articles from researchers within the community. If you were to publish in a research journal, the editors would ask you to cite at least some references that tie back into the audience who are reading. The farther you wander from the known authors, the more work you’ll have to do in the writing, and the longer the resulting paper. If you were looking to keep within the guideline of 15 pages for the final research report, you might consider how you’re going to be able to fit that content within those limits. I don’t really mind reading longer papers, but they should be longer because of significant contributions to knowledge, rather than educating the reader so they he or she can appreciate the direction that you’re taking.
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